One of my ambitions in life would be to write a novel. I would love to write a novel set in Jane Austen's time and maybe I will in the future....I'd also love to write a chick lit book and I guess that would be the genre that my piece today fits into. Here is a snippet of an idea I've had for a little while-hope you enjoy it, put your feet up and grab a cuppa (actually it's not that long but who needs an excuse hey? ;)):
The sun streamed through the blinds and made the shadows dance on the crisp white linen. Abigail turned over to avoid the new day but the harsh cry of her mobile phone alarm brought her into reality. She walked to the bathroom and looked at herself in the mirror. Was she still attractive? Had she aged since she’d met Ian? Maybe she’d just become too comfortable. Abigail held back the tears as she showered and got dressed for work. Another day of being somebody else, trying to forget, faced her. A simple black A-line dress, flattering but professional, was her chosen outfit for the day. Abigail glanced over at the clock, she’d obviously taken a bit longer to get ready than she thought. She was going to be late. With one swift movement she picked up her handbag and keys and ran out of the door.
As she
went down in the lift she hoped she wouldn’t meet anyone. Abigail wasn’t good
in the mornings any day but today was definitely not a good day. She watched
the display flashing each floor as she descended to the ground. No unwanted
meetings in the lift, maybe today was on her side. The lobby was bare as she was able to escape
her building out onto the streets of London.
The
harsh, bitter wind of November hit her as soon as she left the revolving door.
She’d forgotten to wrap up for this time of year but didn’t have time to go
back. Abigail quickly jumped on the tube towards her office in Holborn. It was
the usual mad morning rush, men in suits with umbrellas, women in high heels
trying to drink their coffee whilst swaying with the train and the occasional
tourist who’d wanted to experience the morning excitement of London. Abigail
kept checking her watch, it seemed that time was ticking away and the train was
getting slower and slower.
Finally,
she arrived at her stop and rushed out of the station. First stop was the local
coffee shop close to her office. She wouldn’t be able to face her colleagues
until she had a black coffee and a croissant inside her. It would seem that she
had become a regular, she didn’t even need to tell them her order, they almost
had it ready for her as she walked through the door. As Abigail stood soaking up the
warmth of the shop, she looked around and noticed couples snuggled in the
corner as if they’d been there all night, young women on their laptops enjoying
the cozy atmosphere, friends who were eagerly catching up before
work, as well as the token businessman talking loudly on his mobile so all of
the world could hear how important he was.
The
size of her office block loomed over her as she entered the minimalistic, glass
lobby. Abigail decided to take the stairs today, it was only two floors and it
would do her good. It had nothing to do with her avoiding all human contact of
course. As soon as she started up the cold, concrete steps, she regretted her
decision. She was so unfit, she decided enough was enough and she had to start
getting the most out of her gym subscription she paid for every month. Perhaps it was just what she needed. Arriving
on her floor, most desks were occupied as she tried to sneak past without being
noticed.
“What
time do you call this Missy?” bellowed a high voice behind her as she reached
her desk.
“Hi
Carol, sorry, it took me a while to get sorted this morning, you ok?”
“Think
I better be asking you that question, you look like hell! Have you seen the
state of your eyes? They look like two swollen tomatoes! He’s not worth it, I
told you,” Carol almost yelled across the office. Abigail admired the honesty
of Carol the majority of the time, but today, just for one day, she’d like to
be told she looked fine or that no one would notice she’d spent most of the
night crying into her pillow.
“Thanks
Carol! You’re a true friend!”
“Aha, a
smile! Knew I could cheer you up.”
Abigail
couldn’t help but smile at her best friend. She had been the one she had
confided in, the one who told her that everything would be ok, and the one that
had tried to convince her that none of this was her fault. Of course, Abigail
blamed herself. How could she not?
Hope you enjoyed it, let me know your thoughts. I've just typed this straight up so it is a little disjointed and needs lots of drafting but I hope those of you that enjoy this kind of genre liked it :)
Thanks for popping by.
Arline
xx
Love that snippet!!! You should write a novel for sure! I'd buy it! :)
ReplyDeleteAww that's sweet, thanks Sandra!x
DeleteWow Arline thus is a great start! I really want to know why she is crying over this man. Keep going. Maybe you could have a weekly post that continues the story.
ReplyDeleteGood idea! Maybe I will...perhaps after the May challenge...I'm just about keeping up!! Thanks hun x
Deleteoooh yes.. please write more.. I want to know what happens next :) You should totally write a novel!! ... Ooh I like Simone's idea of a weekly continuation!! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Sammi!x
DeleteKEEP WRITING! I'm keen to read the next installment!
ReplyDeleteAww thanks...will do!x
DeleteI agree with Simone, I have to know and would keep coming back if you did something every week!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kellie...will try to do some more installments in June!x
DeleteI have to know the end of the story - listen to the comments - you must finish this!
ReplyDeleteLol thanks Lisa!x
DeleteYou could develop this into an entire book and I would want to read every word of it. the imagery is wonderful!
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Thanks so much Paula, that's so kind!x
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